The way people talk are way too straightforward, without thinking about place or time. It’s not just the npcies (I don’t know how to make npc plural) mc and his friends are like that too. There is literally no plot. He started with the objective about finding his parents whereabouts, then completely stopped doing that. He got into a school but the school was shown for 10 chapters at most without anything worth mentioning happening, while if something were to happen in the middle of the situtation suddenly everything changes without any disclosure about what had happened… Overall the whole story seems like written by someone who doesn’t have any original thoughts nor don’t even know how to create a storyline or do worldbuilding. He gives you some shit and expects you to fiil in the blanks like its some fricking assignment.
Just a Crow
The way people talk are way too straightforward, without thinking about place or time. It’s not just the npcies (I don’t know how to make npc plural) mc and his friends are like that too. There is literally no plot. He started with the objective about finding his parents whereabouts, then completely stopped doing that. He got into a school but the school was shown for 10 chapters at most without anything worth mentioning happening, while if something were to happen in the middle of the situtation suddenly everything changes without any disclosure about what had happened… Overall the whole story seems like written by someone who doesn’t have any original thoughts nor don’t even know how to create a storyline or do worldbuilding. He gives you some shit and expects you to fiil in the blanks like its some fricking assignment.